Hmm. This was..interesting. I'm not yet sure how high it's scoring, but it was certainly interesting.
(By the way, the reason this is appearing on Saturday, rather than Thursday, is that the station showing the program on Sunday unexpectedly died last week. It's better now, so hopefully "Allegiance" will come out all right.)
Anyway, here's a quick synopsis:
The Enterprise takes on board one Commander Kern, Klingon Defense Force, as the return favor to Riker's visit aboard the Pagh. Upon arriving, he immediately jumps on everyone for various inefficiencies and the like. Everyone, that is, except for Worf. Riker makes a formal suggestion to Kern that he adapt slightly to Federation ways, just as Riker adapted to Klingon ways aboard the Pagh. He says "This is not a Klingon ship," to which Kern replies, "No, Commander, it is not--if this were a Klingon ship, I would have killed you for offering your suggestion."
Soon, however, we find out the real reason Kern came aboard the Enterprise. He is Worf's younger brother. (Shades of Sybok, but this is better done--Worf didn't know he existed either.) He was only 1 Turn old (yes, Turn--someone's been reading Anne McCaffrey) when Worf and his family left for the Khitomer outpost, and was left with a friend of the family. Very few people in the Empire know his true lineage. He came on board to see how "Klingon" Worf is. When he discovers Worf is satisfactory, he tells Worf, "The challenge is yours to make." Their father, Mogh, has been accused of treachery in the destruction of the outpost, and Worf must go before the High Council to clear his father's name. If he challenges and fails, he will be condemned as a traitor and exe- cuted.
Worf immediately decides to go, and asks Picard for leave. Picard refuses, saying that if a respected officer is going to be tried for a capital crime, his Captain must be at his side. Worf chooses Kern as his cha'dIch (essen- tially his second) for the trial. When he arrives, Durris (the son of his father's greatest rival) makes the formal accusation, and Worf makes the challenge.
The leader of the Council, Kempeck, privately urges Worf not to continue the challenge, saying no dishonor will come to him if he departs before the mokba, the formal presentation of evidence. Worf refuses. Durris ambushes Kern in a tunnel below the city, telling him to let Worf stand alone, and saying that he knows Kern's true lineage. Kern refuses, and is severely wounded by an assassin. He will recover, but cannot be cha'dIch. Worf asks Picard to serve-- he accepts.
Thanks partially to the Enterprise computers, and partially to Picard's zeal in finding the one other survivor of the Khitomer massacre, Worf's nurse Kahlest (who lives in the Old Quarter, a rather rough part of town), the truth is dis- covered. It was Durris's father who betrayed the outpost and sent the defense codes to the Romulan attackers, but his family is influential, and the truth could bring the Council down. They chose to implicate Mogh, not expecting Worf to challenge, OR that there was a second son of Mogh. The judgment stands, but Worf, rather than allow himself and his brother to die, accepts Discommodation: essentially admitting his father's guilt and allowing the Council to turn its back on him (assumedly forever). He wishes his brother to remain alive, to one day clear Mogh's name.
Okay. Now, some comments.
This was, in general, a very sound episode. Most of the scenes on Klinzhai (which is, of course, not named such--more on that later) were very nicely done, and the characterization of the Klingons, in general, was sound, as were those of the regulars. Some examples:
--Kern's subtle insults to Worf to provoke him before revealing himself. --Durris stripping Worf of his sash upon the formal accusation, saying "you shall not wear the emblem of our people". --Worf's dressing-down of Kern, insisting on certain rights: "Aboard this ship, you are my first officer, and I shall obey you. But in the Council Chambers, you are MY cha'dIch, and you do NOT insist." --Picard accepting Worf's invitation to be cha'dIch--IN KLINGON. Wonderful to hear those syllables fall from his lips.
I may think of others while typing--if so, I'll mention them later. :-)
I did have a few minor quibbles. Most notably, there was no real motivation behind Durris's attack on Kern. I suspect Kern would not have done as well as Picard in tracking down Kahlest. It clearly had something to do with the whole conspiracy of the High Council, but something clearer would have been nice.
Also, I'm surprised that Worf allowed Picard and company to use so much infor- mation from the Enterprise computers to get the evidence used in his favor. I don't exactly know why, but I can't quite picture Worf seeing that as complete- ly honorable. That may be a personal bias, though. (Heh--as if some of this stuff I write ISN'T personal bias. :-) )
By the way, any lingering worries that perhaps the Khitomer outpost and Norindra III (from the legendary "Yesterday's Enterprise") were perhaps one and the same planet (a thought I'd managed to justify to myself) have now been dispelled. Not only do all Federation peoples also refer to Khitomer as Khitomer, but the nearest Federation starship to Khitomer during the attack was the Intrepid-- NOT the Enterprise-C. Let the matter be put to rest.
Now, about the "Klinzhai" question. They don't name the planet Klinzhai, but that's okay, because they don't name it AT ALL. Picard simply orders the ship to "The First City of the Klingon Imperial Empire". A decent compromise between admitting the novels exist (gasp!) and alienating a lot of John M. Ford fans.
Perhaps it's because I'm six days late with this and still tired, but I really don't have much more to say about the show. It was quite good, and I recommend it, but it wasn't quite a 10. Let's see what happens.
Plot: 9. It was just an 8, but the further insistence of the High Council on letting the charges stand even when they've been found out was unexpec- ted enough to jump it up. Plot Handling: 8.5. I wanted some motivation for the attack on Kern. Characterization: 9.5. A couple of the Klingons were slightly too human, but quite good apart from that. Technical: 9. The analysis of the time-synchronization of the Intrepid sensor logs with the Romulan logs was interesting, but there was a tad too much stock footage.
TOTAL: 9. Nice work. I like it.
Picard is kidnapped and his place taken by a duplicate. Looks interesting, but my main attention got caught by someone who appears to be of the race of Capt. Rixx. (Remember him?)
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